MOSQUE ARCHITECTURE TODAY: BIGNESS AT THE CENTRAL MOSQUE OF PRISHTINA
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Further revision needed!
The paper although touching on a multidimensional topic fails to show a well-structured presentation of the arguments. The text lacks references; a lot of statements are rather emotional and the entire language of the paper is not always appropriate. The main question remains unclear, methodology has not been adequately highlighted, just like the outcomes of the study performed to produce the paper are vague and need further refinement. Besides, proofreading is absolutely required before the paper is presented to published.
Further revision needed!
The paper although touching on a multidimensional topic fails to show a well-structured presentation of the arguments. The text lacks references; a lot of statements are rather emotional and the entire language of the paper is not always appropriate. The main question remains unclear, methodology has not been adequately highlighted, just like the outcomes of the study performed to produce the paper are vague and need further refinement. Besides, proofreading is absolutely required before the paper is presented to published.