The proposal needs to be reviewed and to avoid to be more descriptive and general..

The proposal needs to be reviewed and to avoid to be more descriptive and general, I do recommend to rely on case studies. The structure of the paper is very clear. However, it looks more descriptive. The methodology needs to be developed by highlighting the characteristics or the specificity of the Mosque.
The expected conclusions or recommendations are ambitious in a way their application or implementation will be in any region or context?